150 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. Use specific details and examples to support your answer.

There are many arguments if it is bad that children are allowed to watch television. In my opinion, I totally agree the argument that that is bad. This is because of three reasons; getting their eyes worse, making their brain hardened, and having their physical health weakened.

First of all, it is the well known fact that watching television makes human’s eyes worse. The effect is more powerful to children, so they may live with bad eyes in their whole life. Moreover, eyes that have been already bad could not be cured. Therefore, it is necessary to prohibit for children to watch television.

Second, television just provide so much information. Forced injection of information without consideration makes children’s brain thoughtless more and more. According to a research, the children that watch television from their early age have lower inteligence index than ones that do not. This is a good reason that children should be prevented to watch television.

At last, children to watch television do not tend to do physical excercises. If their parents help them get out and play on the ground, they never do not move their body and watch television on everyday. It is obvious that this leads them to become less healthy. Thus, their parents should not allow the children to watch television and let them play on out of the house.

In sum, television has three bad effects, which are for eyes, for brain, and for physical health. Therefore, I strongly argue that television should be turned off in sight of children since allowing chlidren to watch television must make bad effect to them.

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